Some Advice for HubPage Newbies or HOW TO get other Hubbers to read your stuff!

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By Don Bobbitt

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As Your Reader, Who am I?

I, like so many of my favorite Hubbers, not only love to write, but I also love to read interesting articles and such.

I love finding a good recipe for a tasty dish, as much as i love discovering a great Poem or Short Story.

I love to read technical articles on computers and such; as well as articles on this special world of writers that I am a member of.

I love to watch a good, funny, sad, or just entertaining video that provides me with interesting or at least entertaining distraction.

So, I am one of many potential people out here that are waiting to be a part of your audience.

And, of course, you are placing the labors, of your love for writing, out here in the hopes to capture my attention.

And, once captured, you hope I keep reading your fantastic writings.

Otherwise, why be a Hub Writer!

If you are writing for your own entertainment only, then just keep writing, and stuffing the finished works into your old cedar chest in your attic.

Maybe someone will discover them once you are dead? And, you can avoid criticism of your hidden works!

What I have written here, in the following capsules, are; what I consider, the things that a good Hubber needs to do with each and every Hub that they write in order to be a success on HP.


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Your Profile! Who are You?

Who exactly are you? And ...... Why should I read your work?

That's right, who are you? All Hub writers have a Profile Page!

The Profile page is where you, the writer, tell me, the reader, what you want me to know about you.

Profile pages can include such a wide range of information, from funny and cryptic data, to packed tomes of references, and even very personal biographies.

My fellow Hubbers have a wide range of personalities, and in my opinion, their biographies reflect this variety.

BUT .......

Yes, But!

But, I like to know who has written these Hubs that they are sharing at me, so I am a believer in reading the persons profile, always, either before reading the Hub or after.

You see, I often want more perspective on the Hub, and I get that from knowing more about the Hub writer and I get this from his/her Profile.

From my perspective, when I read a profile, I often make the following assumptions, based on what they say about themselves;

1- No Profile? If you have no profile, then, to me, you either have no personality or you have something that you don't want me to know about you and I am immediately suspicious of Hubbers with no Profile.

2- Short Cryptic Profile? If you feel that 1-2 sentences written in some cute or sassy collection of phrases, that say nothing, and just waste my time, then again, I see someone without much to say, and who's work is probably, boringly the same as the silly Profile that I have just read.

3- Space Cadet Profile? These are those people that feel that they must provide a profile that is so packed with implied intelligence and self importance that reading it brings on feelings of nausea. I run from these people because often their writings include the same stilted opinions.

4- Link filled Profile? Sad to say, we all need to provide an adequate number of links to our other works and Blogs, while at the same time avoiding have our profile become a billboard.

Where the appropriate limit is for adequate links without a profile being packed with such and no longer saying anything coherent about the writer, is for each writer themselves to decide.

You can only injure your projected persona with excessive Links. But, at the same time? You need to strategically place them in your profile.

4- Rambling BS? Sure, i, as a writer, myself, and as an avid reader, will just love your profile if you fill it with random crap! Especially if it's rambling crap filled with spelling and grammatical errors.

Yep, i just love to spend my time trying to figure out just "what the hell" you are trying to say! Come on, people! Really!

5- Short to Medium sized Biography? If you give me a short biography that says something that is important to you, about you, then I feel more comfortable with your writings.

Why? Because, after reading such, I will now know something about where your perspective may be coming from on your subjects. And, if you write a Profile that is interesting and even intriguing? Even Better!


Using Capsules to focus your information

Capsules! You really need to use the Capsule function that HP provides. The most important reason for using capsules is to help you organize your work.

For instance, even if you just want to share a simple but favorite recipe with your fellow Hubbers, you should have at least four (4) capsules included;

Capsule-1 should include a good and yet realistic picture of your food or dish that you have provided a recipe for.

You can get a good picture of pretty much any dish if you go to a site such as Flickr or one of the many others available on the web.

I prefer an actual picture from the Cook, even if it is not as professional a picture. At least I can see what the dish looks like.

Capsule-2 should include the Introduction to and description of your Recipe. We all want to know something about the recipe, what makes it so important to you, and why they should try it.

I mean, really, I can do a quick search on just about any food or dish and end up with hundreds or even thousands of recipes.

Why should I use yours? What makes it special? Was it your grandmothers? Is it Low-Fat, Calorie, Carb?

Capsule-3 should include a clear listing of the ingredients used in the recipe. And, an unwritten rule of recipe writing is to list the ingredients in the order that they are used in the recipe.

Capsule-4 should include a clear and concise list of the directions for the construction of the food or dish.

The directions should be clear above all, and not allow for any errors during the process.

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By organizing your Recipe or even your story in such a manner, with capsules, you provide your reader with a nice recipe or story that is segmented, giving a good flow of information or story for the reader.

Think about it! Even if you are writing a Poem or a Short Story or a technical document, if you look closely, you will often find that there are natural breaks in your writing that allow for the use of capsules.

Of course, a Haiku poem or a very short story may not have enough content for making logical breaks into capsules without damaging the flow, but you should at least try to find such and use them when possible.

Provide Breaks for ADs with Capsules:

Another necessary reason for using capsules in your writings is to provide breaks in your Hub for Ads.

First of all, Google needs a few break areas in your Hub to place their Google ADs.

Secondly, you also need breaks for your own personal Ads, as well as Pictures, Videos, Data Tables, Surveys, Quizzes and such, that you might want to include on your Hub to help capture the readers interest, and raise the overall ranking of your Hub.


Source: Don Bobbitt

What are you going to tell me? and Why should I read it?

I am a firm believer in the old idiom that is quoted by many Speakers, Preachers and other people that have to tell something to a group of people. And to paraphrase;

First- Tell them what You are going to tell them!.

Second- Tell them what you want to Tell them! and,

Finally- Tell them what you have just Told them!

Because of this, I am a firm believer in opening my Hubs with a good, clear description of what you are going to read about in the following Hub.

If I can capture your attention and interest in this first few sentences, then I have a chance to hold your attention through to the end of my Hub.

And, in many of my Hubs, where applicable, you will see that I will often attempt to wrap up my Hub with a short summary for you to take with you, mentally.


Good Grammer! Don't make me stop reading!

Please use Good Grammer!

I bore Easily, and Bad Grammer bores me to the extreme!

OK, there are a wide variety of opinions of whether to use US English or British English, or Slang, or whatever, when you are writing.

My opinion is simple.

If I can read your Hub, and not trip over (very many) grammatical errors, then I will probably finish your Hub.

Will I like it?

That, my friend, is another question, but if you want me to like it, then you have to get me to finish it!

If I have to constantly stop, backup, and reread your Hubs content, then I am not happy, and as a result, i will probably not like your Hub!

I really don't care if you tell me that you have written a story in a cockney accent and that it is a good and interesting story that is true to form.

I really don't care if you write a story in American Redneck slang; again, if you tell me that is what you are doing, and that it is true to form.

I really do not want to read a story, or travelogue, or a recipe, or whatever, if it is written in Indian, or Pakistani, or Chinese, or whatever slang version of the English language you might use there, that I cannot follow and understand without a lot of effort.

You see, I am your reader, and as I have said, my patience threshold is very low, especially if you are wasting my time with an unintelligible Hub that you are just putting out there to make a Buck

These Hubs that are essentially unreadable, take the chance of being negatively Flagged by the reader, and that's not a good thing, if you are a writer who is serious about your work.


Shorten your Paragraphs!

I was often called on to write technical documents over my career.

And, one of the things that I became aware of very early was that people really don't like to have to plow through long unbroken paragraphs of information.

When you break a paragraph down into short ones or even individual sentences, the reader often finds it easier to read and thus understand what you are saying.

There is just something about having a areas in a document where the writer provides a break for the eyes that makes it more understandable and entertaining.

If you give the eyes a break, you also give the brain a break.

Give the brain a break and it can chew over what you have just told them in bites rather than large chunks. Think about it!

So, in my opinion, give your readers a break and feed their brains in bites, or shorter paragraphs.

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Provide Links for more detailed information.

Links!

Google likes to see Links!

But remember, they should be good and informative links that are relative to the overall subject of your Hub.

For instance, Goggle just will not think much of a link to your personal Cookbook in a Hub about Automobile Tires, or Knitting a sweater.

And, they will punish you and your ranking, eventually, when they catch up with the reference that you slipped in.

No, you should provide good informative Links to sites that allow the reader to expand his knowledge of what you have written, with a click.

Also, if you use links, make sure that you set up your HTML code so that the link is opened in another page, and they can get back to your Hub.

It's a bad thing that you are doing to yourself, if you provide a link for your reader and they cannot get back to your Hub easily.

There is a very good Hub, called Readers, How to Keep them, on how to do this, written by fellow Hubber, Sinea Pies,

Self-Promotional Links- You want to use self-promotional links sparingly in your Hubs.

If the Google search engine or even HP finds that you have too many of these links in your Hub, then you will, again, be punished with a lower ranking.

One rule-of-thumb is to use only one or two self-promotional links in each of your Hubs to avoid being tagged as being too self-promotional.

Google likes for people to search for stuff and they like for people to read Ads and even purchase from the people that pay for the Ads, occasionally.

Once you accept this little piece of reality, then you will find that there are Useless Links and Useful links out there for you to use.

Useless Links- What is a Useless Link? Well, when you go over and search for some further information on your Hubs subject, and you find a link to a site such as Wikipedia, for instance.

It might have some very good data available. Bit, it has no Ads.

Well, this is not a favored link to use from Google's perspective. If there are no ADs then they don't have any opportunities to make more money from such a link.

Usefull Links- On the other hand, if you find a link where the site has, in addition to good data, numerous Ads, and even links to other sites with even more ADs, then you have hit the Google Link jackpot.

With such links, they get more opportunities for making even more money if the reader keeps clicking on these. And your ranking goes up.


Use Photos and Videos to accentuate your subject visually.

Photography!

I am a frustrated Amateur Photographer at Heart.

And I have been such for years. Ever since the world of cameras went to digital, I have kept my photography cataloged and stored on hard drives.

And, often i will use my own photography to "beautify" my Hubs.

But, there is one lesson that I learned very early with my pictures. When you place a photograph of yours on the web, it is out there for the world to see. And that is a good thing!

But, sad to say, just like what happens so often with our hubs, your photography is also out there for the world to steal.

I have really found only one surefire thing that I can do to control this unapproved use of my photography, short of including distracting text across my picture.

And my solution is to use only low-resolution Thumbnails of my photography. This way, if someone want to steal it, they will get a smaller and sadly reduced-quality copy of my work.

Because of this loss of control of my property, I have even started using free picture sources such as Flickr for the occasional added picture, on my Hubs.

Videos: Videos can be a really great addition to a Hub.

Some of the more popular Recipe Hubs that I have seen recently, are the ones where the Cook/Chef took the time to record portions of the food preparation process and added these videos to their Hub.

And,the occasional; music video, political video or even social video can add yet another perspective to what you have written in your Hub.

I will occasionally use videos from YouTube, myself when I find a good fit to my subject.


WRITERs BLOCK!

Use money making Ads Frugally!

Hub writers, almost all of us, want to get paid for our writing.

And, to that end, we are putting ADs into our Hubs, with the hopes that our readers will click on the ADs and we can make a few pennies from the advertisers via Google Adsense and other such tools.

Which Ads will you see in your Hubs?

Google Adsense- With Google, they will place ads into your Hubs, strategically, that they feel match what your Hub is all about.

And, Google uses such things as Keywords, Headings, Links and such inside your Hubs themselves, to determine the best ADs to place in your Hub.

I mean, really, if you write a Hub on Cats for instance, and you see Life Insurance ads on your Hub, after waiting about a week for the Google Spiders to settle down, then you need to get into SEO techniques and Tags and Keywords in your Hub.

Because, you have really confused Google and you need to work the Keywords they are assuming for your Hub.

There are so many good Hubs available, for you, on making money with your Hubs, such as, SEO Techniques, by the Hubber ktrapp, that you just need to take this subject on as a sub-task to your writings, and learn as you go along.

AMAZON Ads- Then, there is the AMAZON capsule. It is available to provide ADs on your Hub and with Amazon Ads, there two inportant things for you to define when you use them.

1- Do you want to go onto Amazon and select specific products, that will be listed on your Hub to enhance your opportunity for sales, or

2- will you allow Amazon to place ADs, at their discretion, relative to your predefined keywords

And, of course, you have to have an Amazon account, for payment.

eBAY Ads- Hub writers can also use an eBAY capsule for advertising eBAY items on your Hub.

And with eBay, as with Amazon, you can also select specific products or use predefined keywords for placement of ADs in the eBay capsule.

Links Capsule- You can use the Links capsule to place links, along with a picture and descriptive text to your other sites (web pages, web stores, Blogs, etc.) where you have products that you wish to sell.

AD Limitations- There are limitations on a Hub as to the umber of ADs you can use.

The problem for most of us is that neither Google or HP or anyone else will document these limits.

In the world of HP, you really need have a word count in your Hub that is large enough to support the number of ADs that you want to use.

For instance, with a short, 300-400 word Hub, you had best not use more than say, 1-2 Amazon and/or eBay ADs and only one or maybe two of your own.

Even this could push the envelope, so to speak.

On the other hand, a Hub of, say, 2000-5000 words could easily have 4-5 Amazon and eBay ADs and 2-3 of your own Links without getting you into trouble.

It is a very fluid thing that the worlds of Google and HP seem to adjust to their own standards over time.

So, caution and frugality with ADs is recommended. At least until you have established yourself as a relatively prolific and quality writer.



Make your HUB interesting from Beginning to the End!

Whatever you write, whether Poetry, Short Stories, Recipes, or technical documents, make them interesting and make them flow well.

All of us have read a book, at one time or another, where, when asked; How did you like the Book?, you think for a minute and say;

Well, It took a while to get into it!

or, It was really Dry at first, but it got better at the end!

These are not words of praise, and ...... it is a Kiss of Death for Hub Writers as well.

Make your Hub not only interesting, but readable, and make the words flow from sentence to sentence, right up until the reader is actually surprised, and a little disappointed that he has reached the end.

Do this and you will keep your followers.


Wrap Your HUB up with a Great Ending!

A writer should never Just Run out of Story.

A story, not only has a beginning, it must have a great Ending. An Ending that says;

And That's What I'm Talking About! ...... with the exclamation mark!

Even something as mundane as a recipe for white bread can have an ending that reinforces, in the readers mind, the fact that this is a great recipe for white bread!

So, in words or pictures, give your HUB a great Ending!


Before you Publish your Hub, EDIT it well!

One of your biggest enemies, as a writer, when you finish a Hub, will be your desire to release it to the world to read.

Right Now!

It is one of my major weakness' that I too must deal with, all of the time.

When you finish a Hub, save it and walk away from it, for a while.

Go drink a glass of Tea, or turn on the news, or whatever you might need to do.

Just take your mind off of the Hub and what you were trying to say, and just get into something else for a short while. Clear your Head!

Let it get Cold!

Then, an hour, or a day, or a week later, go back and read it, from a fresh perspective.

It will be amazing what you will catch that may have embarrassed you, had you not allowed it to sit and then reread it.


Work the Comments, they are your Followers, and they deserve respect!

In the world of Hub Page, we are all writers and readers.

Your readers will leave comments on your Hubs.

You will never see negative or hurtful comments, but you want comments.

Receiving a comment is an indicator that you have piqued someones interest with your writing and that they have opinions to state, themselves, on the same subject.

And, to me, a good readers comment making a good point on my Hub, deserves my studied response to the reader.

And, often, to me at least, a good comment drives me back to the readers own Hubs often just to see what they have released recently that I may have missed.


Writing is still a GOOD Thing!

Looking back at this Hub, I see that I have gone off onto a rather long path full of suggestions, ideas, and ways to write a good Hub.

Well, please, as a Newbie Hub Writer, don't allow this to intimidate you.

You are here because you are a writer, and you want to be a better one.

On HP, these are some of the things that I have learned over the past couple of years.

Use them as you will!

Writing is still a Good Thing regardless of how much work is involved!

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This means that I own this article and you have the right to use and enjoy it personally, but if you want to use it commercially then you need to get my permission, in writing.
This means that I own this article and you have the right to use and enjoy it personally, but if you want to use it commercially then you need to get my permission, in writing.
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Cre8tor profile image

Cre8tor Level 4 Commenter 3 months ago

Thanks for the input. Just getting started, I fear my hubs may be lacking in some areas and I want to strengthen them before writing more. This seems it could be a lot of help.

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debW07 Level 1 Commenter 3 months ago

You've written an extremely thorough analysis and provided many helpful tips for writers, new or not, on HubPages. Great information!

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Don Bobbitt Hub Author 3 months ago

Thanks Cre8tor, for the kind comment on my Hub. I hope to see more from you as you progress.

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Don Bobbitt Hub Author 3 months ago

debW07, I hope that you can use some of what I have included in this Hub to avoid some of my own mistakes over the past. Good Luck!

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Kris Heeter Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

Very useful hub not only for newbies for those of us that aren't quite as new but can still learn more. Great info here!

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GypsyFootedWoman Level 1 Commenter 3 months ago

This was by far one of the longest hubs I've read so far.

just as you were pointing out the Readability of putting in frequent line breaks; I was thinking what a great way to keep the eye from straining. I always want to put in more breaks with mine but then I fear I’d be violating some age old proper writing technique doctrine prohibiting it, if nothing else your Hub showed just how useful those “breaks for the eyes” are.

Thank you for that and all the rest. Great advice.

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Don Bobbitt Hub Author 3 months ago

Kris Heeter, thanks for going through my ramblings for Beginners. Once I started, one thing after another came to mind, until I just had to stop myself with force. LOL!

Antway, thanks again and I hop there was something useful in there for you.

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AlexandraChapman 3 months ago

Excellent content for a newbie. Thanks

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Don Bobbitt Hub Author 3 months ago

Thanks for the kind words, Alexandra!

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lmmartin Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

Good info for everyone, not just newbies. I am particular agreement with the long paragraph advice. Nothing like a solid block of black to put me off trying to read. Voted up, Don. Lynda

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paulgc Level 3 Commenter 3 months ago

Hello Don, This is a super fantastic article and your points are well thought out and very useful indeed.Hopefully your excellent advice will help out the newbies.

I'm not sure if i should mention this as i dont want to raise a negative point about such a great article, but in the Grammar section of your article you wrote:

"If I have to constantly stop, backup, and reread your Hubs content, then I am not happy, and as a result, i probably not like your Hub!"

I think that the "i probably not like you hub" bit may be grammatically incorrect. I may be wrong and if i am i do apologise.

A fantastic hub Don, voted up and awesome, thanks for sharing.

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Don Bobbitt Hub Author 3 months ago

Lynda, Thanks for your nice comments. I just went off and into one of those modes yesterday after clicking on two different newbie sites and their first several Hubs. I go away like this sometimes, but so far, I have come back. LOL!

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Don Bobbitt Hub Author 3 months ago

Paulgc- Great to hear from you, my friend.

Well, There I am, trying to make a point about grammar and making an obvious grammatical error in the middle of my pontifications.

What can I say? The great thing about the English language is .... the English language! And, I tend to screw it up on a regular basis.

But, Thanks for your catching this one and telling me so that I can fix it now rather than letting it sit there, naked, until I got around to rereading it in a month or so. Have a great day, Paul!

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grayghost Level 1 Commenter 3 months ago

Don, Great advice and pointers on Hubs and the writing vocation in general.

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Don Bobbitt Hub Author 3 months ago

greayghost- Hey, nice to hear from you. I appreciate your kind words, and maybe it will help a few people in their search for "How To".

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Don Bobbitt Hub Author 3 months ago

greayghost- Hey, nice to hear from you. I appreciate your kind words, and maybe it will help a few people in their search for "How To".

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feenix Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

Hey, Don,

Even though I have been hubbing for nearly a year, I still consider myself to be a "newbie." And that is largely because when it comes to knowing all there is to know about the business of hubbing, I am just scratching the surface.

Thus, for me, this article is very educational and informative. I learned quite a few things that I was unaware of before and some other things that I am sure will help me here on site, in the future.

Thank you very much for writing and publishing this piece.

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Don Bobbitt Hub Author 3 months ago

feenix, thanks for the kind comment on my Hub. I kind of went into a trance when I wrote this one, so it is a little longer than normal, but I did try to follow what I said myself with this one!

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Marcy Goodfleisch Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

All new members to this site should be required to read this hub, and then take a test on it. If they can't pass the test, they can't hub here. Great advice - voted up and useful!

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Don Bobbitt Hub Author 3 months ago

Marcy, Thank you so much for your kind words. I hope this hub will help some of those that read it. thanks for the vote Up and your support

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phdast7 Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Terrific Hub! Full of information and advice. Some of it seems so basic and so obvious and yet I see "newbie Hubs" all the time and I wish they had read and followed your suggestions. Thanks for taking the time to speall all of this out. Theresa

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Don Bobbitt Hub Author 3 months ago

thanks Theresa for the kind words. I hope that I can help a few, leapfrog my mistakes.

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stars439 Level 7 Commenter 2 months ago

Great ideas, and fine reading. God Bless You.

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Express10 Level 6 Commenter 2 weeks ago

Very good tips that are easy to put into use. Voted up and useful.

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Don Bobbitt Hub Author 2 weeks ago

I hope it is useful to you Express10, and your traffic increases right away. Have a great day!

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