Southern Dancer

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By Don Bobbitt

Magnolia Bloom
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Magnolia Bloom
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Introduction

When I wrote this little "non-poem", several years ago, I had been in a campground in central Florida for a couple of months.

It was our first really long stay at one place during the winter in our RV. And we had really learned a lot about "long stay" camping.

The most important lesson, I think, was just "how to relax and enjoy your surroundings.

The weather was so grand that winter, that at night we opened our side windows by our bed, to allow the night breezes to blow and keep us cool.

The very first night, I noticed that if I turned onto my left side, in bed, the view out my window was of an enormous old Live Oak tree.

The limbs of that majestic, old tree spread in all directions and were covered with long and beautiful strands of Spanish Moss.

During the day, they were a beautiful combination. But at night, directly across the campground was a common yellow street light, and it gave a fantastic backlight to the Spanish Moss hanging on this majestic tree.

Being a light sleeper, I wake up often during the night, and I often amuse myself with writing stories and such in my head. Sometimes, I inspire myself so much that I get up and jot down notes on what I have come up with.

Must of my "night notes"don't survive the light of the day, but occasionally one will, and get turned into something like this story.

Anyway I go into the habit of just staring at this ight and shadow show presented to me by this combination of Tree Limbs, Spanish Moss, and the Night Winds, and I would let my imagination run free and sway with the Moss on the winds.

You see, to me, what I was watching, out that little RV window really did give me the feeling of watching a complex ballet in the air.

The view was often so compelling, and I would become so entranced, that I had to force myself to turn away and go back to sleep.

I hope this writing of mine imparts some of that feeling to you, also.

Graybeards

I am lean, and lithe,

as I dance in the sweet summer breeze,

under my full bright Moon.

I sway and catch the night scents,

of a distant Magnolia,

and freshly bloomed Gardenia,

Then, suddenly,

the sweetness of both are overpowered,

by the pungent odors,

of a nearby Lilac.

All of them seem

to be competing,

for my fickle, yet hungry attention.

Both day and night, through weather

fair and foul, they haunt me.

A fresh gust of air appears,

and without volition,

my fellow Graybeards and I,

are caught up in our,

never ending dance of life,

swaying, synchronized and silent.

We gather ourselves,

and slowly dance,

first left, then right,

but always,

at the mercy of the wind.

Never complaining

nor crying, but in stead rejoicing,

in the flavors delivered by the wind.

Our insatiable appetites,

receiving sustenance

with each burst and shift of the fickle air.

I rejoice in the breezes,

as I feed on the air itself.

I am Spanish Moss,

I never tire and,

my hunger never ends.

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SPANISH MOSS on the Peace River
SPANISH MOSS on the Peace River
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Source: Don Bobbitt

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James A Watkins Level 8 Commenter 2 years ago

You know, I'm not a big poetry guy but I enjoyed this. It's very nice and expresses some sweet sentiments. Thanks for the pleasure.

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Dee aka Nonna Level 6 Commenter 10 months ago

Decided to read a bit more once I discovered you while hub hopping. I really enjoy your "non-poem". Lilac are one of my favorite flowers so I was impressed that you gave it a mention.

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